(De Va)

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My Other Soul - Poem by (De Va)

My other soul doth fly this night
By my side in astral flight.
Dips and curves we do in fun,
Playing happily in the night sun.
Above the poles, below the sky
Our hearts pounding as we fly
Together at last though miles apart,
We have known right from the start,
That we belong in this lovely form
Sheltered from the Astral storm.
Soaring high about the Earth
We joke and have abundant mirth.
Like children frolicking at play
It is here we wish to stay,
My other soul doth fly this night,
And the heavens smile at the sight


Comments about My Other Soul by (De Va)

  • Rookie - 205 Points Siyabonga A Nxumalo (1/10/2012 2:57:00 PM)

    'and the heavens smile at the sight'

    great poem Deva.i like it. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 3 Points Sajna Kailas (1/4/2012 5:27:00 AM)

    great write with speculative words.loved it a lotttt! God Bless You Dear Deva! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,194 Points Unwritten Soul (12/16/2011 11:27:00 AM)

    Great rhymes, Beautiful Imagery, the Lovely contents..So De Va, it really deserved good likes from any readers..that was impressive work, keeep it bring a good uplifting mood...definitely i like it De_va :) _Unwritten Soul (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Silentpoet Grl (12/7/2011 3:10:00 AM)

    Truly a beautiful poem! ... you have a way with words... carrying the reader to another place -
    Love these lines: 'Our hearts pounding as we fly, Together at last though miles apart' (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 108 Points Vipins Puthooran (12/6/2011 3:03:00 PM)

    A g'd rhym'd poem, I love it, , , well penning! ! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,684 Points Dave Walker (12/5/2011 12:26:00 PM)

    This is a really really good poem, i really love it.
    This is poetry at its best. A fantastic write. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, December 5, 2011

Poem Edited: Monday, January 23, 2012


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