Amitava Sur

Gold Star - 10,448 Points (20.01.1950 / Kolkata)

My Right - Poem by Amitava Sur

The lovely flower with alluring essence...
The ripe fruit with it's juice...
The flushing meadow and the golden bay
Attract me so intense.
The gorgeous lass with her curves and cleavage
Entices me and fascinates.

I being a foodie too -
And a connoisseur of beauty and love,
I’ll eat, drink, inhale and praise-
With fullest content and delight.

As a bee from flower to flower
Roams in the garden so free
Sucks honey with it's will and wish
Quite merrily with such an ease.

No matter – who thinks what
In whichever way he may like
It is my birth right to cherish my life –
In my own befitting way.


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Amitava (24.10.2013)

Comments about My Right by Amitava Sur

  • Gold Star - 29,226 Points Roseann Shawiak (5/16/2014 6:15:00 PM)

    This side of you wanting and loving - being enticed and fascinated brings a smile
    to my heart at how carefree you feel in your own befitting way. This poem fits you
    perfectly, Amitava. RoseAnn (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 13,591 Points Lyn Paul (10/26/2013 7:09:00 AM)

    A great carefree write. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 363 Points David Wood (10/26/2013 6:10:00 AM)

    To be as free as a wasp with out a car in the world would be great. Another good poem. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, October 25, 2013

Poem Edited: Saturday, May 17, 2014


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