Shahzia Batool

Freshman - 930 Points (Pakistan)

My Scattered Thoughts Iv - Poem by Shahzia Batool

The journey of life
is spanning o'er centuries
even then everyman has to submit himself
to his final end...

My God!
carrying the loads
of unfulfilled aspirations,
where to go leaving your altar...

wishing to receive the happy tidings
of the one reaching home safely
before the sun lying down
into the grave of evening...

Time is but a flowing stream,
never stopping anywhere, but a moment will come
when it will be falling into the ocean
of timeless eternity...

How cute the world of dreams are,
unless you open your eyes; a humble supplication
don't stay attached to me, for i don't wish to see you
in regrets, for carrying the gifts of hopes in hands
i'll be back to my home...
i wish to do all left undone by the rest...
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is anything impossible in the world?


Comments about My Scattered Thoughts Iv by Shahzia Batool

  • Rookie - 152 Points Muhammad Ali (1/25/2014 5:27:00 PM)

    aapi, if i can aproach, Everything is not impossible, means every bad thing is possible!
    ...
    We are human. I think is not it good!
    ...
    And in ideal life (if it matters in real life, not just in the books or Books) , conditions are bad when we are moving on the bad side and He is not happy from us.
    ...
    A human should always be good with others. (should always be good with himself too. p.a.i.n.f.u.l. but not always) .
    best wishes. and nice poem. (Report) Reply

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  • Freshman - 512 Points Ruth Walters (4/30/2013 7:56:00 AM)

    How cute the world of dreams are,
    unless you open your eyes my sentiments as when the world is just to hard to take I hide within my dreams....... (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 558 Points Tribhawan Kaul (4/21/2013 2:03:00 AM)

    A very beautiful poem. Last stanza is inspirational and gives hope even though one feels detached to the journey of life taking its own course. :) (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 558 Points Tribhawan Kaul (4/21/2013 2:01:00 AM)

    It is a beautifully written poem. Last stanza is inspirational and gives hope even though one feels detached with the life's journey taking its own course. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 8 Points Anjali Sinha (4/20/2013 7:34:00 PM)

    Lovely- Inspirational poem! ! ! ! ! . Nothing is impossible in this world- dear Shazia- - one just requires grit and determination.
    Great write. Keep writing- enjoyed it. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,289 Points Walterrean Salley (4/18/2013 11:44:00 PM)

    carrying the loads
    of unfulfilled aspirations,

    Every aspiration unfulfilled is quite a burden. May we strive to accomplish each of our heart's assignments, that we leave none of our dreams unfulfilled. Wonderful Shahzia. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,584 Points Anthony Di''anno (4/18/2013 8:48:00 AM)

    I love the way you scattered your thoughts Shahzia. As for your question? I believe that we create our own reality through the magnetic force of our vibrating atoms. Our aches, our toil, our labour, our joy, our strength, our triumphs all contain atoms that colour the paint we wash upon the walls of our holographic world. I find it very easy to imagine that nothing is impossible.
    I enjoyed your poem. Thank you :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 2 Points Lasoaphia Quxazs (4/18/2013 7:06:00 AM)

    It is no time to get home yet. Only those people dies who cannot learn anymore, who want TOO much, definitely do not get it. We get what gives us a lesson. We are here on this earth to learn, learn and learn, put it into God's computer for reason only He knows.
    When you submit yourself for the will of God, love everybody, I mean Everybody, have kindness to all human or anything else, find gratefullness for what you have, that is the time you shall live in true happiness here and now. One man or woman cannot be god and do what we want, when we do not even know the whole story, we do not even know who we are. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,253 Points Unwritten Soul (4/18/2013 12:50:00 AM)

    Lovely write! ! ! i loved it
    your question, is there any impossible in this world?
    yes it is impossible itself_Soul (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,848 Points S.zaynub Kamoonpuri (4/17/2013 12:39:00 PM)

    The journey of life and u pennd a wondrful poem throughout so nice to read. Thanx 4 yor coments too. I so luv readin u. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 543 Points Yasmeen Khan (4/17/2013 11:41:00 AM)

    You always dare to dream and I believe our visions and dreams are spurs that help us to live a life to its fullest.
    'Time is but a flowing stream' and you swim on it's waters with hopes, desires and dream. well written! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,522 Points Valerie Dohren (4/14/2013 12:33:00 PM)

    Time is but a flowing stream - beautiful line, a lovely thought-provoking write Shahzia. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 340 Points Captain Cur (4/14/2013 9:44:00 AM)

    A pleasant read with deep undertones.
    Are we moving through time or does time move with us,
    or is this moment our only continuum. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 71 Points Indira Babbellapati (4/14/2013 7:04:00 AM)

    nothing is impossible for a soul embarked on a sincere search within... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,437 Points Lyn Paul (4/13/2013 1:00:00 PM)

    My scattered 111 and iv both a perfect 10, maybe 2 many readers on to allow me to rate. Cheers (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,437 Points Lyn Paul (4/13/2013 12:54:00 PM)

    What beautiful words. Absolutely thoughtful thinking. Thank You (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 4,711 Points Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi (4/12/2013 11:31:00 PM)

    nothing is impossible in the world, if we have the desire...inspirational.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Diwakar Pokhriyal (4/12/2013 5:34:00 AM)

    very true and insightful poem: -) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Frank James Davis (4/11/2013 12:56:00 PM)

    Brave, insightful thinking artistically expressed.
    Excellent, Shahzia! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 19 Points Abhishek Tiwari (4/11/2013 12:27:00 PM)

    Thats was realistic! ! And what a beautiful way too connect it with the mother nature (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, April 6, 2013

Poem Edited: Thursday, October 10, 2013


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