My Undone Sleep Poem by Kesav Venkat Easwaran
My Undone Sleep
The moon was not at its best
As I landed on its helm
It remained unfriendly rude-
No warmth, no welcome
I moved down the long ladder
Fell back on my stream
What if I lose my undone sleep?
I would get more dreams
April 8,2023
To have such metaphors in a poem is a dream come true. Love it, Kesav!
An instant wake-up poem out of a dream at midnight I think...using even such a moment is the skill of a true poet...an enjoyable write Kesav
A unique depiction of the moon. Usually we are drawn to the moon for its beauty and warmth but as someone said 'maybe the moon is beautiful because it is far'.
Wonderful.....Some dreams are really fascinating and motivating, this being one such dream.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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5/17/2024 6:54:15 PM # 1.0.0.1119
A fascinating poem.....just beautiful. Loved it dear poet.