Ankit Verma


My Valentine Moon - Poem by Ankit Verma

Moon hide in eclipse,
but you always in light.
Moon changes every day,
but you always same for me.
Moon brighten by other's light,
but you having your own beauty.
Moon is beyond my reach,
but you always with me.


Comments about My Valentine Moon by Ankit Verma

  • Rookie - 40 Points Tanya Gupta (4/4/2014 6:48:00 AM)

    nicely comapring your love with the beautifull moon............good job.

    come and read my poems and give me your reveiws.

    regards,
    tanya gupta. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Indu Rinki Verma (3/20/2014 5:55:00 AM)

    beautifully written... :) (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 824 Points V P Mahur (3/9/2014 2:57:00 PM)

    Dear Ankit,
    Very nice poen. Keep it up

    This one for you:

    149. Unique Creation
    O Creator of all!
    Just tell me clear
    From where
    You brought the stuff
    To create a mother
    So full of endurance
    And so tough
    To bear all the hardships
    Of bringing up
    ..................
    .....................
    read full text on my page.
    I invite you to read my poems and give your views.
    Thanks! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,222 Points Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (2/25/2014 8:14:00 AM)

    A compelling and creative contrast that is refreshing. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sara Abu Zaki (2/12/2014 5:30:00 AM)

    The moon is rich with symbolism especially in my culture. Here i believe it’s meant to symbolize inner strength (?) nice poem could use a little editing. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 10 Points Reinny Trink (2/11/2014 11:50:00 PM)

    Nice idea. I think an extra is, the, or stylistic comma here and there would help with reading it. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, January 26, 2014

Poem Edited: Thursday, February 13, 2014


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