My View Upon Life…. Poem by Sylvia Frances Chan

My View Upon Life….

Rating: 5.0


My View Upon Life….
Be Content With This Precious Life....

All the gossip in everyday life,
I have not heard anything so far,
but since corona pandemic effected everywhere
and states are in force,

you make the dolls dance,
one gossip after another comes in quickly,
before I realize it's gossip,
the news is already gone,

to read about that,
is difficult for me,
just as God tries to stop me from reading that,
I don't remember anything either,

thank you dear God for saving all the poem hunter's problems,
which have nothing to do with writing good and beautiful poetry,

I don't even mind people "fighting" because of theirmessages,
I don't mind at all, some names no longer exist and suddenly new names are coming from Australia, India, North America or England,

everyone is welcome, open to the world public, everyone says their answer,
that's how it is,
anything and everything happen on the internet,
peaceful is different from peace and contentment.

Please don't publish that much poison,
don't be grumble, it hurts everyone who knows,
and deception has nothing to do with creating beauty in poetry,

just like the father monkey, who loves his children so much,
that he crushes them to death, because he loves them so very much...

I have to tell you this because it hurts so much...
please make beauty and never write about poison....
soar high again, heaven deep….


©Sylvia Frances Chan
Thursday 9 April 2020
4 days before Easter Sunday.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I have to tell you this because it hurts so much...
please make beauty and never write about poison....
soar high again, heaven deep….


©Sylvia Frances Chan
Thursday 9 April 2020
4 days before Easter Sunday.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 09 April 2020

Every one should be welcomed to the world of poetry. Poetry should carry the beauty and responsibility. Poetry should carry peace and love. Wonderful message is transferred with greater perception. Every poet has to soar high. Every poet should have deep love for poetry. This poem is very amazingly and brilliantly penned. This deserves full 10 point and I have already rated.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 09 April 2020

Life is precious and life is full of joy whenever remains with God. We should remember God everyday at each moment. Due to attack of Corona virus all of us are in Lock-down and we should be in safer place and safer mood. We are in quarantine at own homes. We are not being able to hear all the gossip. We should be in mood of silence and creating golden and beautiful poetry.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 09 April 2020

If anyone writes poetry with vices and violence then this is just like Poison and it hurts others who know the truth or who do not know about it. This is so sad. Poetry should be beautiful and peaceful. We completely agree with you exactly. A poet of high qualification should be responsible for creating honest, peaceful and beautiful poetry and he should not defame or insult any generous woman. He should have sense that whatever he is saying should be beneficial to society.

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Mahtab Bangalee 09 April 2020

Gossiping is everywhere Poisonous the world airs Venomous fictional teeth planting the air media And this PH family Still safe staying home But sometimes some stupid ghost figures Untimely bring the full of hemlock cups Whatever Lonely there strong wise mind Still alive healthy

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Kumarmani Mahakul 09 April 2020

Problems come and go. Although these affect us temporarily still we keep patience and overcome. We convey about every problem to God. He listens to us as he is always graceful towards us. We are here to create good, peaceful and beautiful poetry and problems cannot hamper our effort of values at all. Beauty in poetry and peace in poetry should be our ambition.

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Rebecca Navarre 21 March 2021

Very beautiful, very true! .. Such beautiful heart expressed in this! .. Definite 5 Stars! .. +++++

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Budhashaya Behera 09 April 2020

Deep thought is motivated during this lock-down time. We have to create peaceful poetry and unnecessary gossip we have to avoid. There is no need to hurt others by telling poisonous word. You are wonderful poetess.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 09 April 2020

Freedom of one person should not affect another. One should be responsible not to defame another or cause harm to another with selfish motive and greedy attachment. Poetry is freedom of expression and this should be free from vices. Your opinion or view upon life is wonderful and here I have presented my comprehensive review. Thank you very much for sharing your wonderful view. This poem is excellently penned.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 09 April 2020

Always you tell the truth and write about your wonderful perception. You are rare among rarest poets and poetesses. You are very right and poetry should carry peace. Being peaceful is different than a state of happiness and satisfaction. More than we are happy we should be peaceful. Time is precious. We should utilize this and we should not waste this unnecessarily. Everyone has freedom of expression but freedom should be expressed under self control.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 09 April 2020

Especially for personal gain one should not deliberately cause or force someone to believe something that is not true or imaginary. One should be responsible and should not complain and complain about something in a bad-tempered way. This hurts and creates poison. And poetry should be away from such poison. Creating beautiful poetry is the act of a responsible poet.

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Sylvia Frances Chan

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Jakarta, Indonesia
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