Nano Poetry-7 Poem by Tribhawan Kaul

Nano Poetry-7

Rating: 4.5


Nano poetry-7
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Blood, not thinner than water
Yet boils in equal measure
Waste brings untold miseries
Death, hunger, thirst.
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Whenever my heat beat for someone
I feel I have opened the door
To be blessed
By some unknown.
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Descending fireball
Receptive ocean
Horizon exults in
Creating illusion.
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All rights reserved/Tribhawan Kaul

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Wahab Abdul 17 May 2013

so lovely....you have said very aptly...love it...

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Captain Cur 14 April 2013

I liked the style you choose to write this poem. Interesting title. Horizon exults in creating illusion. I liked that line. Good finish.

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Shahzia Batool 08 April 2013

Excellent credit on your name...this Nano poetry is...all are nice..the 2nd one is special...

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Gajanan Mishra 05 April 2013

good and meaningful. thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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Tribhawan Kaul

Tribhawan Kaul

Srinagar (J & K) India
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