I did dream for more time
Wish and want for proper time
A first date....wine and dine
The cinema your hand in mine
A first time lips meet
An evening stroll along any street
A first mornings kissed
Nay this universe missed
That moment in the past was lost
Then permitting only time at cost
At an inconvenient date
Drawn together all too late
Precious sand falls by gravity's ask
Hear the ticking futility as deceptive hours pass
Time wistfully wasted
Longings end is sorrowfully tasted
no will to wash my hands of kin
A life time made and saved here in
Pitiful heart beats on
Invested hearts continue strong
Good flow here. It's written in a way that is not so laboring to read, as so much of it is on this site. Good ending to the 'moment past'. If you can, i'm trying to promote and get my work out there and known. I'm about to release my latest conceptual novelty and all twelve pieces are here on this site. They each cover 12 different areas in society that have been infiltrated by the powers that be. A few of them are; The Equation, (Big Banking) Orwellian Youth, (The Family Unit) Justis, (Law) and Each and Every Day (Food) .
every line is just ridiculously good just like john my fav line would be Precious sand falls by gravity's ask i love this
Awesome. Love the lines A first date....wine and dine The cinema your hand in mine A first time lips meet
Sensual moments shared, fate plays it's usual game... serenditity once again... LOve this write Stevie! And what a title! Perfect! Great Write! ! ! ! ; -) -Kelly.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Hear the ticking futility as deceptive hours pass I got a funny rolling feeling in my belly as I read this poem.....strong feeling! Yep, I get it xxx