Oblivion Poem by Aftab Alam

Oblivion

Rating: 5.0


I am the one,
Who is none?
Isn’t it a fun?

What are you?
We both have same fate,
Please love Earth, don’t hate

Rich or poor, black and white,
King or beggar
Dust to dust; am I right?


Then why there is hitch?
Why to fear ditch?
Ready for glitch- glitch –glitch

Before departing,
Correct your defect,
For eternity; act-act-act

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 18 March 2015

Nice piece of work. Yes, we should love the earth and, put things right. E.K.L.

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Susan Williams 29 September 2020

We both have same fate, Please love Earth, don’t hate- - - - > please, please, please, our planet is staggering

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Alison mujati 17 March 2018

The rhyme is well executed,you may read mine, Brain cuffed

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Liza Sudina 06 May 2015

respect to those who think and act or Eternity! ! !

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Kelly Kurt 06 April 2015

Good advice, Aftab.

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Ruby Mostazir 25 March 2015

nice :)

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