Obsession - Haiku Poem by Khadim Hussain

Obsession - Haiku



Like Majnun
Living lost memories
Lonely in mela

Majnun: Obsessed. Madly or desperately in love. Celebrated lover of Laila.
Mela: a fair

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Elysabeth Faslund 24 June 2007

This is excellent Haiku...3-6-5. I am very happy that you do not choose, with this one, to follow the strict 5-7-5. The old Haiku Masters seldom did! In fact, one of the best Haiku I've read by a Master had a total of 19 syllables. Some, less than 17. Great! Poignant. Near to the reader.xxElysabeth

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Khadim Hussain

Khadim Hussain

Lunger Pur Baly, Jhellum, Pakistan
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