Richard McClellan

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Ode To Bitter Sweet Goodbye - Poem by Richard McClellan

Stabbed in my heart
my blood's oozing out,
drippin n' tricklin,
it's poolin on the ground,
beneath my torso,
as I collapse on thee,
this was my bitter,
my bitter sweet goodbye,

fo' i left a letter,
sent to many, including you,
to explain my reasons,
why i died for you,
that's right! , your secret,
secret's out in full view,
fo' all to see,

wish i could have seen,
seen the look on your face,
when they took me away,
now that i am gone,
an its over for us,
what's left for you?

Just a bitter, so bitter,
bitter sweet goodbye!


Comments about Ode To Bitter Sweet Goodbye by Richard McClellan

  • Rookie - 145 Points Leslie Alexis (heaven Is My Home) (11/4/2011 7:25:00 PM)

    Well written and the fact that you're reading this comment must mean you're not dead. which is a good thing. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 226 Points Vipins Puthooran (10/28/2011 1:54:00 PM)

    Bitter sweet goodbye might stab our heart to seep the pain! ! !
    Good one) well write! ! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, October 28, 2011



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