Can you hear my weeping whisper?
Can you feel that it's full of fear?
Oh! Lord! Please take my hand!
I'm too strange to this land!
I want to meet you, I'm truly tired
I'm losing the light in this cryptic shade.
Don't let me go! I wanna be yours!
I'm full of blames but still there are doors!
Once I will fly to you, so please wait for me!
Only one thing I worry about, 'do you still love me? '
Great poem! One thing is that God always loves you. his love is unconditional. He just wants you to love Him as well.
Yes God still loves you. He is our Creator and the Sustainer of our lives. You wrote a very humble and emotional poem here. It really touch my soul. He first loved us. Good.
'I'm losing the light in this cryptic shade.' nice imagery in that line. nice piece overall, He watches all the land
God is love he will always love you and help you. A beautiful write!
He will love you till the end of time. Nice poem well written
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
The God is puting the ways of salvation in our ways. You are carying the soul of God That is called the holy ghost Look after it. God always will love you