Daybreak! , The bathroom door I Face
Frustration dawns my life again
Great hunger strain, Struggles? ... No gain
Oh pain! Oh pain! ! Oh pain! ! !
Wave of woe, nothing to show
Life's spinning wheel, Oiled but not free
Problems so tough... I solve in vain
Oh pain! Oh pain! ! Oh pain! ! !
Everyday, Live like a slave
I'm trapped within my inner cave
Someday...I'll win
When will this be? ...
Oh pain! Oh pain! ! Oh pain! ! !
entrapped to the cell of struggle...of course its painful..well implied write..
You have greatly captured a moment of every day in my life. Nicely done.
the ever-reappearing story of struggle and depression...my classmates and i are currently studying self-esteem in health class, and this is an great example of how personal (and other) preferences can negatively affect one's self-esteem... lc
This is something that everyone can relate to. You've done well in capturing your audience :)
We all experience pain, physical or psychological. I loved the last paragraph.10/10.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
The pain of pain is so painfull. Painfully profound!