On Thirtydays Of Separated Love Poem by Neela Nath Das

On Thirtydays Of Separated Love

Rating: 4.0


Thirty
Days ago on Shakespeare's birthday
We had our last talk..
Thus,
Days passed; the shrouded love
Is ticking with the secs of clock.
My,
Repentance for denying the last call
From you to stay back.......
Now,
Crawling in my teary sight
Chooses to retreat to old track.
Still,
I celebrate lone cocktail
Without a peg of drink...
Addiction,
Chases me back to the talkative tick,
Prancing on my sorrowful brink;
Flash,
Bursts into thousand beams but,
The fire flies show their lovely light..
I
Silently make you the guest,
Of my segregated special night;
Let,
Sip the tumultuous cup of love,
To widen it to a long stride;
We,
Must take part in life's fest;
Our love is our sky-kissing pride!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shihabudheen K J 22 May 2012

Absolutely wonderful write.grief or the feeling of seperation between hearts well built.

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Captain Cur 22 May 2012

I like the beginning referring to Shakespeare birthday, the great love poet, and the tics of time, the sip of nonalcoholic wine, speaking about love and loss. Very well composed.

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Kee Thampi 29 May 2012

a love with snuggles of living god, and a fear to him Crawling in my teary sight Chooses to retreat to old track. Still, I celebrate lone cocktail Without a peg of drink... Addiction, Chases me back to the talkative tick, Prancing on my sorrowful brink; Flash, Bursts into thousand beams but, The fire flies show their lovely light..

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Eric Cockrell 24 May 2012

incredible passion.... renews my faith in life...

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Ebi Robert 24 May 2012

This poem is good for a favourite. No doubt.

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Heather Wilson 24 May 2012

Beautiful poem, so well written, Must take part in life`s fest, lovely,

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Indira Babbellapati 22 May 2012

bringing shakespeare added to the richness of the poem...

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