Herbert Guitang


One Tiny Atom In Love - Poem by Herbert Guitang

We pray on the worship place
Listening to the Word, sermon and preaching
We kneel, and standing while talking to your Highest Being
Bowing down, planking or sitting meditating to Supreme Consciousness

We have different names of Messenger
Different names of Followers or Leaders
Different dogmas, teachings and decrees
And we have different names of God, god and goddesses

Many ‘were’ persecuted and killed
Tortured, massacred, and avenged
Ambushed, discriminated, condemned and judged
Because on the word ‘faith’

But although different, they All have the Highest Commandment
That is to “Love One Another”
Does it love one another only within the group?
Does it love one another only in the same faith worldwide?

Love One Another Is Universal
Joining and uniting in peace with different skin and race
Holding hands in different nations and continents
Embracing with different group, cultures and faith
Understanding and respect even the unknown in outer space

But love will begin on myself
Not later and not tomorrow
No time to wait others
Love starts at this moment and spread like an air of life to all LIVING CREATURES
To unite as One Tiny Atom In Love


Comments about One Tiny Atom In Love by Herbert Guitang

  • Rookie - 125 Points Helena Zen (5/6/2014 10:25:00 AM)

    Let us dig to the deepest into ONE LOVE (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Vilma Gomez (5/4/2014 4:07:00 AM)

    unite as One Tiny Atom In Love, , Love is Universal.. True indeed (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 15,915 Points John Westlake (4/27/2014 8:26:00 PM)

    A powerful lesson to be learnt here. Love should be universal (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 9 Points Jessica Hernandez-damian (4/25/2014 7:59:00 PM)

    Its wonderful poem. love has different means to other people but I do believe love is part of universal. Great job! I enjoy read it. (: (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 524 Points Vizard Dhawan (4/24/2014 9:57:00 AM)

    universal poetry

    Good to read such a fine piece of poetry.....! ! !

    Well done (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 421 Points Shania K. Younce (4/20/2014 7:36:00 PM)

    I to believe love is universal. Bien! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 120 Points Monica Rupazo (12/7/2013)

    Yes, some times it just has to begin with us for the way we see things is different from the other. If we start things, others will learn and follow suit. Excellent work there. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Wilfred Arzaga (11/25/2013 1:38:00 PM)

    and the Lord saith..as I have loved thee, love one another.... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 45 Points Mary Amrutha (11/24/2013 1:41:00 AM)

    love can conquer our hearts (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,101 Points Heather Wilkins (11/18/2013 3:05:00 PM)

    an interesting read grear thoughts. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 75 Points Ebi Robert (11/15/2013 4:23:00 AM)

    a wonderful appeal...many will not understand ur wonderful message but i do..thanks (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 237 Points Pradip Dasgupta (11/12/2013 10:19:00 PM)

    nice poem.philosophical. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 956 Points Queeny Gona (11/12/2013 3:59:00 AM)

    You are right in saying Love one another is Universal and it is an awareness stirring poem! (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,086 Points Lee Mack (11/10/2013 9:00:00 AM)

    Well written... love takes faith only conscience [Holy Spirit] works... as in your poetry (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 30,273 Points Valsa George (10/27/2013 9:08:00 AM)

    Love one another is the only principle we are bound to obey. Though all religions preach this, how many of us put it into practice? We should at least refrain from harming others through sheer jealousy or sefishness! As you have rightly put, let it begin from ourselves! Great poem with a beautiful message!
    , (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 30,273 Points Valsa George (10/27/2013 9:08:00 AM)

    Love one another is the only principle we are bound to obey. Though all religions preach this, how many of us put it into practice? We should at least refrain from harming others through sheer jealousy or sefishness! As you have rightly put, let it begin from ourselves! Great poem with a beautiful message!
    , (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 460 Points marvin brato (10/23/2013 4:58:00 AM)

    All poems are masterpieces, for they were composed with passion! This is a masterpeice poem! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,466 Points Adeline Foster (9/30/2013 4:45:00 PM)

    Interesting poem, read mine - My Heart is Native -
    Adeline (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 731 Points Ency Bearis (9/30/2013 6:13:00 AM)

    Great wisdom with such message. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Genalyn Reyes (9/26/2013 8:47:00 PM)

    Wonderful wisdom on this poem (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, May 6, 2013

Poem Edited: Friday, November 29, 2013


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