Treasure Island

herbert guitang


One Tiny Atom In Love


We pray on the worship place
Listening to the Word, sermon and preaching
We kneel, and standing while talking to your Highest Being
Bowing down, planking or sitting meditating to Supreme Consciousness

We have different names of Messenger
Different names of Followers or Leaders
Different dogmas, teachings and decrees
And we have different names of God, god and goddesses

Many ‘were’ persecuted and killed
Tortured, massacred, and avenged
Ambushed, discriminated, condemned and judged
Because on the word ‘faith’

But although different, they All have the Highest Commandment
That is to “Love One Another”
Does it love one another only within the group?
Does it love one another only in the same faith worldwide?

Love One Another Is Universal
Joining and uniting in peace with different skin and race
Holding hands in different nations and continents
Embracing with different group, cultures and faith
Understanding and respect even the unknown in outer space

But love will begin on myself
Not later and not tomorrow
No time to wait others
Love starts at this moment and spread like an air of life to all LIVING CREATURES
To unite as One Tiny Atom In Love

Submitted: Monday, May 06, 2013
Edited: Friday, November 29, 2013

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  • Jessica Hernandez-damian (4/25/2014 7:59:00 PM)

    Its wonderful poem. love has different means to other people but I do believe love is part of universal. Great job! I enjoy read it. (: (Report) Reply

  • Monica Rupazo (12/7/2013)

    Yes, some times it just has to begin with us for the way we see things is different from the other. If we start things, others will learn and follow suit. Excellent work there. (Report) Reply

  • Ebi Robert (11/15/2013 4:23:00 AM)

    a wonderful appeal...many will not understand ur wonderful message but i do..thanks (Report) Reply

  • Queeny Gona (11/12/2013 3:59:00 AM)

    You are right in saying Love one another is Universal and it is an awareness stirring poem! (Report) Reply

  • Lee Mack (11/10/2013 9:00:00 AM)

    Well written... love takes faith only conscience [Holy Spirit] works... as in your poetry (Report) Reply

  • Valsa George (10/27/2013 9:08:00 AM)

    Love one another is the only principle we are bound to obey. Though all religions preach this, how many of us put it into practice? We should at least refrain from harming others through sheer jealousy or sefishness! As you have rightly put, let it begin from ourselves! Great poem with a beautiful message!
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  • Valsa George (10/27/2013 9:08:00 AM)

    Love one another is the only principle we are bound to obey. Though all religions preach this, how many of us put it into practice? We should at least refrain from harming others through sheer jealousy or sefishness! As you have rightly put, let it begin from ourselves! Great poem with a beautiful message!
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  • marvin brato (10/23/2013 4:58:00 AM)

    All poems are masterpieces, for they were composed with passion! This is a masterpeice poem! (Report) Reply

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