Marvin Brato Sr

Rookie - 169 Points (March 2,1960 / Davao City, Philippines)

Our Death - Poem by Marvin Brato Sr

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Death

Procreation is a gift
gift shared in marriage

Marriage is sacred
sacred defines life

Life is quite monumental
monumental as in special

Special thing being alive
alive to take adventure

Adventure is exploration
exploration for survival

Survival declares the fittest
fittest among others is finite

Finite is human life's span
span of living is unpredictable

Unpredictable is our existence
existence that soon shall vanish

Vanish shall become all of us
us as human succumbs to death


Comments about Our Death by Marvin Brato Sr

  • Bronze Star - 2,514 Points Hans Vr (10/28/2013 5:34:00 AM)

    nce thoughts expressed in a very poetic way (Report) Reply

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,253 Points Unwritten Soul (10/27/2013 10:13:00 PM)

    When Life married to Death, eternal bliss is the space_SOul (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,778 Points Dave Walker (10/27/2013 12:15:00 PM)

    We all take life for granted, a great poem. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,742 Points Wahab Abdul (10/27/2013 10:20:00 AM)

    wow, i love the concept...great execution...! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, October 27, 2013

Poem Edited: Monday, October 28, 2013


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