Our Grandeur Teen Poem by Aftab Alam

Our Grandeur Teen

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A beautiful girl from the family bright, attired with green,
She maintained her dignity, if uncared - knew how to preen
Once she was very thirty and dry, all unheard her painful cry,
She gave all that was needed to her subject without sly,

To quench her thirst she jumped into the deep-deep ocean,
Stayed there for quite long, cleaned dirt without motion,
Seen; 'he is younger than before, so beautiful, my green queen',
I woke up to my senses from the dream to see the grandeur teen


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Aftab Alam
Saturday, February 14, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: earth
poem poems beautiful green ocean Rights Senses Teen
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POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This is the future event as I always think about it- our fate, we will die drowning, if we can't change our attitude towards earth. Scientifically; if rain water drained out without harvesting it then every year we will spoil more and more water into drain..Earth can not drink (SOAK) we are not allowing her to drink /resulting increase in sea level/ rain will be more and more on earth yet earth will be blood less/Land will be hugged by the ocean..no land to survive- -we the dirt will be cleaned and then she will be fresh and young
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Susan Williams 21 November 2020

Thank you for adding the Poet; s Notes- -very illuminating

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Kumarmani Mahakul 14 February 2015

In a dream it has been nicely composed, very good word choice.

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