Our Vertical Movements Poem by Marieta Maglas

+10! ! Good job, I loved it! Can't wait to read more. :)

this is beautiful..''memories of our feelings''..this is a sad expression..and your absence makes me feel am alone...dear...i like your piece, absence of togetherness..it's so hard to understand the language of heart..naizz

vow.................perfect.. jus awesome..romantic..too good! ! !

'And Is only The Lord Who can save Our vertical movements…' Amazing... last three lines are wonderful...10+

need to understand Your fictitious existence By being ‘enclosed’ Into another feeling, Where, you and me, We would form Only the memory of our feelings not sure how many poems this poem has left on my presntly parched arid mind... once some sirroco blows I'll see clearly and submit my gratitude

I would be Your reclusive word In your own inside I would disintegrate Your ideas And recompose them For love And yes, I would be That inferred light from you, yes.. the one who reads your message seriously may also feel your words, your feelings and your deep inside concerns.. because the way you write shows that, you follow your heart.. thats why your words are quite capabaple to touch the reader hearts.. I personally like your poetry and yout philosophical way of romantic ideas and the flow endless love... really sweet you are..lovely work 10/10

By waiting that morning, When you would awoke up By being only with me In your mind, 10

nice poem I love it 10

Nothing is perfect around…. Perfection and equilibrium Are all I mean.. And Is only The Lord Who can save Our vertical movements….. it is almighty that stees out our way... very good write and thoughts.....10 read mine yes to to..... dramland...... mary to marry and how are u

WOW! ! ! this poem is AMAZING it's very emotional.. ur a great poet and this is a great poem..keep writing pls