Oyster Of My Heart Poem by louis rams

Oyster Of My Heart

Rating: 5.0


the love in my heart had a strange but long start.
just like an oyster starts off with a grain of sand
and others follow to give a helping hand.
so is the love that i have for you.

that grain of sand found a home where it could start to grow
and slowly it created one of the most beautiful treasures
that the world would get to know.
because it started out very slow.

the home that it was created in was a very hard shell
where it was protected until it grew big and strong
for it knew where it belonged.

and as it was opened by fellow man
there is where it took it's stand.
man opened it slowly with a knife
to protect what he knew he could find
a beauty so precius and so divine.

and with this one pearl of beauty and rarity
he put it with others for the world to see.
that just like an oyster-the love must slowly build
until the strength of it is quiet and still

this is the oyster of my heart of which
you are a very big part.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 30 December 2009

that the world would get to know. because it started out very slow................ya slow n steady wins the race and heart too.... it sweetens the relation and grows in maturity to give enough room for people to know about it.....10 read mine.................anywhere..... fine without you

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Aww. this is so pearly.. I like! !

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Amanda Seltrecht 13 January 2009

I really like this particular poem. It was written with such thought and feeling. Keep it up you are great at it.

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Linda Winchell 13 January 2009

A different twist on this sea crustation. Ten! ! Beautiful! Linda

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very well constructed and beautiful metophoric imagery especially comparing the slow growing love to the slow growing process of that pearl from a grain of sand, a ten from me, great to read

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