Painful Love. Poem by Fay Slimm

Painful Love.

Rating: 5.0


Splitting apart any previous cease-fire,
Shattering words spit quick
Bulleting pain. Yet again.
Their target well met, with accurate aim
They enter the heart of my heart.

Why do I stay as I do?
Do I revel in suff'ring, stupidly cling
Incompatibly to this narcotic thing
Painfully passing as love?

Would that I knew.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bob Blackwell 21 September 2008

Love can be like a drug, we can't let go even when it invokes great pain. Well written Bob

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Ashraful Musaddeq 19 September 2008

A nice small and beautiful work on love. Lovely,10 for it.

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
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