Panorama Poem by Jahan Zeb

Panorama

Rating: 4.7


In the midst of night,
I witnessed soft light,
Astonished I gazed around,
The sky, stars and the ground,
All bathing in light gold,
Resurrection! my mind told,
In my mind a total confusion,
Is this real or mental illusion?
But why not others realizing?
From their beds, not rising,
Then I turned to my right,
Confusion and the mental fight,
Came to an end you on my arm,
Resting so naïve sleeping so calm.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Poetheart Morgan 30 October 2012

So love in your heart but battle in your mind. Surrender yourself Poet! Swimming against the tide

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Hazel Durham 30 October 2012

Just perfect, so beautifully written with lovely rhythm and flow, loved this poem! !

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Maria Young 14 November 2012

A magnificent picture. Loved it

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Poetheart Morgan 09 November 2012

what a fight trying to keep the balance in your life and searching the insidious love, that same love that can hurt you and turn you undone. Beautiful.

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Amanda Laurent 31 October 2012

You've captured a magical moment, and this poem has such a sweet ending. So great!

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Stevie Taite 31 October 2012

The light of your life, literally! Right there beside you!

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 31 October 2012

Dreamlike phase expressed superb poetically with a romantic ending. Lovd d poem.

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Jahan Zeb

Jahan Zeb

Malakand Pakistan
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