Avinash Nair

Rookie - 367 Points (19/10/1988)

Parting Ways - Poem by Avinash Nair

With our fingers entwined in deep embrace
We stare out, away to some different space
The passion unspent is heightened here,
But then there is this guilt with a tinge of fear
We barely meet eyes,
We rarely speak,
But then our emotion finds its voice
Within the silence of our choice.
With her fear laden eyes she looks at me,
A short smile of subtle degree
Passes across her lips
And I try to contain the second that slips,
But then, alas! It is time to part
And our love remains unspent
In our solitary heart.


Comments about Parting Ways by Avinash Nair

  • Rookie - 367 Points Avinash Nair (1/8/2014 10:53:00 PM)

    Thank you, for you comments Rajesh (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 5,480 Points Rajesh Thankappan (1/8/2014 10:33:00 AM)

    Rich imagery. Keep it up. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, December 22, 2013

Poem Edited: Tuesday, May 20, 2014


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