Treasure Island

veeraiyah subbulakshmi


Party Time!


I am going to a Saturday night party,
Where I can meet my primary buddies,
I enter into the closet to pick up a dress,
The dress I bought for my recent birthday,
Looks very dull and everyone had seen,
The Christmas dress got frills, not thrills,
The office attires too formal, not clamorous,
The one with spaghetti strap, gone too small,
The matching cardigans of all hues,
A few are embroidered, painted and plain,
The skirts are either too long or too short,
The chiffon, cotton, nylon and Chinese silk,
Tropical batiks where the nature is intact,
Laced Stockings with hot pants, may look odd,
Designer's gowns that are hung for years,
Never touched for once for Saturday night fever,
Walk through the closet third time around,
Still confused what to choose and display,
At last I decide and my decision is final,
I am going for shopping to buy a new one.

Submitted: Tuesday, February 26, 2013
Edited: Wednesday, February 27, 2013

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  • Gary James Smith (2/27/2013 11:52:00 AM)

    This is a wonderfully humorus poem...........I shared it with my daughter on the phone just a few moments ago...
    I had shared with my daughter how I had just written a poem entitled looking out the window and as I went to find it in yahoo.ca I noticed that you had commented on it. I went to your site to find the poem to read to her as I couldn't find it in my yahoo account and read to her some of your recent poems.........Party Time popped out and so I said, hey let me read this one too you...the title sounds great.............she laughed along with myself............great write veeraiyah.................have a wonderful day.........................Gary James Smith (Report) Reply

  • Roseann Shawiak (2/27/2013 9:03:00 AM)

    Very nice! I like your final solution - go shopping to buy a new one. You brought a smile to my heart with this poem this morning, Thank you. (Report) Reply

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