Ben Gieske


Passing By - Poem by Ben Gieske

coloring book
the crayons please

plinking the piano keys
just passing by

tree in the forest
xxx & initials too

pin pricks in the night sky
connecting the dots

6 after-diner mints
arranged in geometric style

moon landing
footprints in the dust

we come and go
branding the empty places

drifting memories
life simply rearranged

a path of our own
beyond the hills

- September 19,2007


Comments about Passing By by Ben Gieske

  • Rookie - 87 Points Kesav Easwaran (7/18/2008 10:44:00 AM)

    a good passing show on a perfect poetic canvas...well done 10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, July 4, 2008



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