Patient-Doctor Dialogue Poem by Rajnish Manga

Patient-Doctor Dialogue

Rating: 4.8


Patient: Doctor doctor please help me
Doctor: Sit on the chair and let me see

Patient: Doctor doctor shall I be fine
Doctor: Yes, take this pill before you dine

Patient: Doctor doctor what should I eat
Doctor: Everything- except fruit, fish and meat

Patient: Doctor doctor my parents are worried
Doctor: Hopefully, their worries will be buried

Patient: Doctor doctor I don't want to die
Doctor: Give rest to yr mind and don't you cry

Wednesday, September 9, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: doctor,medical,patience,therapy
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Varsha M 09 September 2020

Beautiful dialogue sir. Fruit fish and meat all nutrition out so what to nourish. Thank-you sir.

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Khairul Ahsan 09 September 2020

Ha ha ha, the last line is amusing! A nice poem that rhymes well.

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Anjandev Roy 10 September 2020

Beautifully written.....thank u, dear poet......anjandev roy.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 10 September 2020

A well inked composition. Truly fascinating.........10+++++++

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Sharad Bhatia 10 September 2020

गुरुजी सादर प्रणाम, Very beautiful conversation between doctor and patient. I liked the last line Give rest to your mind and don't you fly Actually the fact of life is we keep doing different kinds of fantasies in our life and do not relax our mind as well as our beautiful body at all.

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Valsa George 16 September 2020

The conversation between the patient and doctor is quite amusingly recorded. It is evident that the patient is greatly under the fear of death!

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Cowboy Ron Williams 13 September 2020

Very nice rhyming, perfect, in fact, except for the fourth couplet, and quite humorous in places. I enjoyed reading this very much. Thanks for posting!

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Indira Renganathan 13 September 2020

Fear of death finally ends in mental turbulence anyway...an interesting dialogue-poem between doctor and the patient...10++++

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M Asim Nehal 12 September 2020

An impatient patient with the volley of questions and a calm doctor trying to find the solution, very craft conversation with a philosophical undertone Rajnish ji, Fantastic, In your Style..10++

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Suresh Kumar Ek 11 September 2020

poem with an innocence of a nursery rhyme

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