Peace Trespassed Poem by Kieran J1996

Peace Trespassed



The shadows encroach,
Upon my glade,
The only peace,
In my mind made,

I visit for solace,
From the pain hidden,
Yet here you've crept,
Where you're most forbidden,

My reprieve ruined,
The barrier broken,
All my fears, nightmares,
Out loud now spoken.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unwritten Soul 25 January 2013

You know how to write a poem very well, a very good one, you own it, i am glad you turning the old dark poem into new brighter collections now_Soul

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Søren Valentine 24 January 2013

I seriously love this poem. The shadows encroach, Upon my glade, this paints a picture in my mind I cannot even describe and the whole of the last stanza is amazing! I also really like the last line of the second stanza... it leaves a profound affect on me personally. Thanks for sharing! Keep writing, yea?

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