How peaceful is your sleep, my thief.
Of course - deserved relief.
You took my whole heart
piece by piece, you think
you own me now in full.
Collecting fragments
you are just pieces-ful.
Peaceful sleep of a thief...
I love the way you play with words without losing the overall sense of the poem. Beautiful and delicate. F
clever alliterative echoes and a catchy rhythm – peace/piece crossover is neatly executed without being trite; winsomely beautiful, a peaceful piece of poetic enchantment... Rgds, Ivan
This first line of the poem 'How peaceful is your sleep, my thief.' is wonderful! Not only the first line, the lines of the whole poem are consistant with the pivotal idea. A small and beautiful poem to get 10 and I did that.
you really are a beautiful writer....every poem is different, yet all hit with great emotional weight..excellent
love seems to be of total completeness unveiling the love by the heart, well penned,10/10, thanks forsharing
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
sleep-thief, peace -relief, piece by piece-fragments whole heart-pieces-ful, collecting fragments-taking heart piece by piece, nice comparisions and equally wonderful contrasts a poetic expression of eternal juxtapositions,