akram saqib

Rookie - 72 Points (14 APRIL / SAHIWAL)

“piece” Of Mind - Poem by akram saqib

The entire energies do we waste
With great care and much haste
On discovery and invention
To enhance the human tension
All the weapons and device
Sins evils and much vice
The fatal bombs, rattles bombs
We rear the cattle bombs
Vicious circle of the power
Expands like the waiting hour
Wish for monopoly and force
Engulfing peace expanding course
Say no to all such deed
Pay only a little heed
Invent devices loving and kind
Just by using a “piece” of mind


Comments about “piece” Of Mind by akram saqib

  • Rookie Rabia Butt (12/10/2011 2:16:00 AM)

    nice poem thought is very unique (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Fade Ward (6/12/2009 7:19:00 AM)

    Dear Akram, A good message through a beautiful poem, very relevant in these strife-torn times piece be with you




    give u ten for that one (Report) Reply

  • Rookie AtreyaSarma Uppaluri (4/29/2009 8:37:00 PM)

    Dear Akram, A good message through a beautiful poem, very relevant in these strife-torn times. Yes, unless man learns to heed the call of his heart and soul, his exercise of mind for inventions and discoveries, sans an ethical base and an ethos of humanity, carries him nowhere except on a path of doom. Love, my dear friend. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Silent Speaker (4/28/2009 2:10:00 PM)

    I love how this poem is so different. Its so unique and distinctive. Well done! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Sarah Childers (4/27/2009 7:10:00 PM)

    I thought that it was very good and very clever. I am not big on rhyming in my poetry, but hey whatever works for you. It was a wonderful piece and I cannot wait to read more. Keep up the good work!

    ~Cheers (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Shirin Sheikhi (4/10/2009 2:46:00 PM)

    so much close to one of my poems unpoblihsed in poem hunter

    missing needs for consolation treats
    disregarding facts to be discreet
    losing sense for the sound of hearts when break

    thats great to think of world issues this much deeply
    best of my wishes (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 368 Points Metin Sahin (4/10/2009 11:00:00 AM)

    wonderful.go on in this way.but be free in verse..write from yoı ur inside (Report) Reply

  • Rookie shreedhar.Shree Bangalore, INDIA (3/29/2009 12:19:00 PM)

    Nice compostion dear friend :)

    yes, the huiman race is much on the destructive course,
    and less on the GROWTH one;
    though the latter one contributes
    Infinitely to the UNIVERSAL PEACE.

    - shree (Report) Reply

  • Rookie ~ Jon London ~ (3/26/2009 1:26:00 PM)

    Peaceful lines spoken with soft tones brings to mind an overwhelming feeling of peace my brother, excellent piece 10 keep up the good work Bravo! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Aijaz Asif (3/23/2009 5:27:00 AM)

    if only we start using our piece of mind in a positive thoughts tahn there will be a peace in this world...a very good and thought provoking write, thanks for sharing 10+++

    rgds
    asif (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 8 Points Anjali Sinha (3/21/2009 12:02:00 AM)

    wowwwwwwwwwww
    i liked your 'piece of mind'
    -10 anjali (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, March 13, 2009



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