Days Never Last Poem by akram saqib

Days Never Last

Rating: 4.2


Often I think
About you
When the feelings of love
Come over above
I can not think
And only blink
My eyes with awe
Which come to a thaw
I think about the days
When do we play
On the ocean’s bay
I sob for the days
Which often raze?
The pillar of strength
Which was a labyrinth
I sob for the past
That could not last
Left me all alone
To keep on bemoan
On the days of the past
This could not last

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
ata khan 22 February 2009

zabardast! ! ! great flow Thanks for sharing

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Catrina Heart 24 February 2009

Rhymes fantastically, printed in eloquence..10

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Jack Price 31 March 2009

Great Poem, very moving! a joy to read!

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Aasma Rehan 16 March 2009

Goodness Saqib you are superb.You don't need my comments specially this poem.It is marvelous.

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Elaine Oxamendi Vicet 02 March 2009

It is a nice rhythm and flow. Easy to read and pleasant. Sentimental also. I like.

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Aijaz Asif 02 March 2009

hello baloch! thanks for the comment..... your poems are extremely good and poignant write indeed with nice rhythmic flows which felts like a water fall...keep it up with the great work....10+++ rgds asif

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Chitra - 01 March 2009

your emotions drift across the page and straihgt into the heart..poignant write

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