akram saqib

Rookie - 72 Points (14 APRIL / SAHIWAL)


Often I think
About you
When the feelings of love
Come over above
I can not think
And only blink
My eyes with awe
Which come to a thaw
I think about the days
When do we play
On the ocean’s bay
I sob for the days
Which often raze?
The pillar of strength
Which was a labyrinth
I sob for the past
That could not last
Left me all alone
To keep on bemoan
On the days of the past
This could not last

Submitted: Sunday, February 22, 2009


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  • Rookie Aasma Rehan (3/16/2009 11:07:00 AM)

    Goodness Saqib you are superb.You don't need my comments specially this poem.It is marvelous. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Aijaz Asif (3/2/2009 10:54:00 AM)

    hello baloch!
    thanks for the comment.....
    your poems are extremely good and poignant write indeed with nice rhythmic flows which felts like a water fall...keep it up with the great work....10+++
    asif (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Chitra - (3/1/2009 11:46:00 PM)

    your emotions drift across the page and straihgt into the heart..poignant write (Report) Reply

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