akram saqib

Rookie - 72 Points (14 APRIL / SAHIWAL)

Days Never Last - Poem by akram saqib

Often I think
About you
When the feelings of love
Come over above
I can not think
And only blink
My eyes with awe
Which come to a thaw
I think about the days
When do we play
On the ocean’s bay
I sob for the days
Which often raze?
The pillar of strength
Which was a labyrinth
I sob for the past
That could not last
Left me all alone
To keep on bemoan
On the days of the past
This could not last


Comments about Days Never Last by akram saqib

  • Rookie Jack Price (3/31/2009 9:00:00 PM)

    Great Poem, very moving! a joy to read! (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Aasma Rehan (3/16/2009 11:07:00 AM)

    Goodness Saqib you are superb.You don't need my comments specially this poem.It is marvelous. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Elaine Oxamendi Vicet (3/2/2009 4:21:00 PM)

    It is a nice rhythm and flow. Easy to read and pleasant. Sentimental also. I like. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Aijaz Asif (3/2/2009 10:54:00 AM)

    hello baloch!
    thanks for the comment.....
    your poems are extremely good and poignant write indeed with nice rhythmic flows which felts like a water fall...keep it up with the great work....10+++
    rgds
    asif (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Chitra - (3/1/2009 11:46:00 PM)

    your emotions drift across the page and straihgt into the heart..poignant write (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Catrina Heart (2/24/2009 3:32:00 AM)

    Rhymes fantastically, printed in eloquence..10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie ata khan (2/22/2009 1:00:00 PM)

    zabardast! ! !
    great flow
    Thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, February 22, 2009



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