Poem Within Poem by Neela Nath Das

Poem Within

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How can I tear the shadow of time
To get into the garden of poems?
I try but I fail, because I forget
The road to imagination.
My wings are missing,
My prosaic life threw the key
Of that paradise in the sea.
I again will knock its door,
to see if my flowers are fresh to smell...

Tuesday, September 20, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: poem
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajesh Thankappan 12 October 2016

Since there is a will, I believe you shall soon figure the way into the garden of poems. This is for certain. However, sometimes we are hit with writers block and feel so uncomfortable about it. A beautiful poem on a very relevant subject.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 22 September 2016

Interest grows more to get into the garden of poems is definite reality is reflected here. But tearing the shadow of time is important task for this. Forgetting the road of imagination does not allow to do so and this is so sad. Knocking in the door of paradise which is thrown in sea will definitely open gateway soon. Here we can seen new flowers appearing freshly will smell pleasant. Outstanding poem this is really....10

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