Jonathan ROBIN

Rookie - 133 Points (22 September / London)

Polyacrostic Palimpsest - Care is Our Dream


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Palimpsest: A manuscript on which more than one text is written with earlier writing, or one level of meaning, partially visible.



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I: plain text - in black
II: Complete acrostic palimpsests.

Care is our dream Care: a core value

Text II is formatted to show letter progression hidden in Text I. Punctuation, spacing, are absent, highlighting

palimpsest phrases invisible in the first version for the sake of clarity... Enjoy!

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(c) Jonathan Robin polyacrostic palimpsest sonnet written 17 May 2008



Care is Our Dream





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Care, a core value, can't be traded, each
At risk may put heart if mistrust dare feed.
Rare welcome marry, ease bring, carry, speed,
Eve, night, day, select ideals free, teach,
Ideas shared as light shines fair. Impeach
Snow frost, ice, or snap cold, back zest's strong seed!
Order true open joys, shrug doubts off, lead
Urge on through summer's sorrow stumped, find speech,
Reveal tender thread to wed bliss reach.
Dreams venerated never veer from deed,
Real harmonies trump pains, deny greed's rede,
Equal friends are full of hope and each
As muse whose human quality warms air,
Meets time as team well matched, as magic pair.




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Care is our dream Care: a core value

Careacorevaluecantbetradedeach
At riskmayputheartifmistrustdarefeed
Rarewelcomem arryeasebringcarryspeed
Evenightdayselectideal sfreeteach
Ideassharedaslightshinesfairimpeach
Snowfrosticeorsnapcoldbackzestsstrongseed
Ordertrueopenjoysshrugdoubtsofflead
Urgeonthro ughsummersorrowsstumpedfindspeech
Revealtender threadtowedblissreach
Dreamsveneratedneverveer fromdeed
Realharmoniestrumppainsdenygreedsrede
Equalfriendsarefullofhopeandeach
Asmusewho sehumanqualitywarmsair
Meetstimeasteamwellmatchedasmagicpair

Submitted: Saturday, May 17, 2008

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