Prayer 2 Poem by Bhaswat Chakraborty

Prayer 2

Rating: 4.6


The sun is Your smile
I smile big in the sun
The moon is Your tip of the teeth
I wonder at the beauty of the moon

The sky is Your hand
One that signals your grace
and gives the gift of fearlessness
You hold my soul in Your sky

The stars are Your nails
I keep gazing at the stars mesmerized
The thunder is Your voice
I stand in awe and caution when it thunders

The wind is Your touch
It thrills my heart to be in the breeze
The earth is Your sandals
I touch them in deep respect

The oceans are Your sight
Far, deep & kind
I dive deep – very deep
In the oceans of consciousness

Love is Your Being
I love to be in Your Love forever!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Joseph Poewhit 14 September 2009

The oceans are a swirl of emotions

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Philosophy of a DewyFlower 14 September 2009

All My Respect/ what a beautiful Lord! Prayer 1 & Prayer 2 come to an agreement: GOD is EVERYWHERE, GOD is BEAUTIFUL.

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Jen Capaldi 11 October 2009

The oceans are Your sight Far, deep & kind I dive deep – very deep In the oceans of consciousness Love is Your Being I love to be in Your Love forever! very creative verses. imaginative association of giving persona to the spiritual and deep love expressed. very well penned my friend. Jen

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Aparna Sinha 25 September 2009

Love is Your Being I love to be in Your Love forever - I even put these lines as my gtalk status once (with your name!) I sometime read them the moment you post them

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C. P. Sharma 18 September 2009

In dedicated heart all these reside. CP

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Noel Horlanda 16 September 2009

Good imagery, designating one self to every part of the universe and at the end a comparison of each between self and nature. Well penned.10+

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Indira Babbellapati 14 September 2009

an interesting prayer indeed!

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