(((Precious Time - 3))) Tanka Poem by Marvin Brato Sr

(((Precious Time - 3))) Tanka

Rating: 5.0


Lingering moments,
We both enjoy the sweet time.
Like honey its love,
Sparks magic into our hearts;
Bringing joy and contentment!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Hitesh Sheth 14 April 2009

yes true love bring and contentment...................Truly described.............Good Write.............10+++........

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Fiona Davidson 14 January 2009

Beautiful Marvin...nothing else I can say...thank you...Fi

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 14 January 2009

This(IMO) , is arguably be the most unique dscription of something that each of us, especially as writers hold so dear....images...memories, of those very special moments in our lives...What impresses me most about this piece, Marvin, and is the reason thai commendate it as 'most unique' is that the piece is quite succinct....YET..... in those mere 21 words....You say all, that needs to be said! Excellent Writing, my friend! F j R 2009

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Marvin Brato Sr

Marvin Brato Sr

Davao City, Philippines
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