Pride we carry, one and all
Remember this frailty before our fall
Idolatry of self, a deadly sin
Destroys humility of that within
Egos; misplaced, where to begin.
MB 7/2014
the end line makes you think it is a question to all who read it.. but, maybe that's how it comes over to me..and it is true we should perhaps have some pride but, not enough that it overshadows others or makes our head grow too big so we can't fit through any door.. and I hope you don't mind my thoughts...
An arostic with a profound philosophical message in it. Thanks for sharing.
An arosti with a profound philosophical message in it. Thanks for sharing.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
The deadly sin we are carrying with us in any form is to destroys everything within and not within. Nice acrostic.Thanks for sharing.