Promise me to be here
When I shed tear
For Your loving songs
Promise me to be here
When you hear
The sigh of the wind in the trees
By my side
Promise me to be here
When I need you to be near
Hug me tightly, oh my love
(2008/6/23)
I loved this one. It's simple, but heartfelt. I only think you could add an 'a' to the second verse, so it would be 'When I shed a tear'. Just a suggestion, though. Very nice work.
A promise sought that means - a lot! Very touching, a pleasure to read this poem! Best regards, *10*! ! Friend Thad
Promise me to be here When I shed tear For Your loving songs........ It is so lovely... beautifully penned down poem.. Rgs Rema
promise...thrice...will be fullfilled...poem short and impressive
Touching and heart warming, to be needed is to be loved,10 again, Lynda xx
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Simply put but very evocative. Music, the Beloved, and Nature have all been included beautifully. Thanks, Nightingale.