***promises*** Poem by mimzy sue
***promises***
We made a promised
To hold, to love forever
To be there for each other
You whispered and
Said, you have a dream
Holding my hands
Walking down along the Road
Far, Far, away we go
Where no one can hurt us
Where there are no boundaries
For Love
For everything
When I looked
Those big innocent eyes
My heart Ached
Darling, Ours is not a fairyland
Where dreams come true
But you believed and
Clung to those little,
Sweet promises we made
No googbye's,
Never to depart,
But deep down inside your heart
You know that
You belong to a far, far away land.....
And you have to go back someday
If only,
Your dreams come true....
well done and inspiring with hope 10 promises are an exceptionable ability which sets us apart from the animal kingdom those lovely species are able to some degree do much that we do but are unable to promise, thus hold it sacred that we can promise
yah! such a promise would only be true when everything is tested by time... love is what we offer, life is what we give... trust is to live beyond time... thats... love and life begin.... your poem is so inspiring to reflect.... i love it... thank you.... God bless
This is a beautiful romantic poem, Soft sensual read. Lovely! ; D
Mimzy, you have expressed your feelings beautifully and innocently. May yours and your loved one's dreams come true...Naseer
Another fine exhibit of your ability to tug at the Reader's heartstrings...through, tightly wound stanzaec architecting, and stellar use of contemporary free-style verse...(1st stanza/1st line...promised, should be promise, as you are employing this word as a noun...not an verb or adverb) Otherwise...very well done, indeed, young lady, as usual! *F j R*
The emotion of this poem is very true, you express some feelings about love, thank you for sharing it with me!
Thank you for pointing me to this.You have a way with words that make eyes and heart both read your work.Kev
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I would like to translate this poem
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Crossing continents, flying to you and thats love all might................pickering your heart.nice piece Mimzy! !