Promising Future Poem by Akhtar Jawad

Promising Future

Rating: 5.0


Dejected and frustrated I was thinking,
man will not survive,
he is no more alive,
but when I saw your up-climbing,
I am now hopeful,
my lips smiled beneath my eyes tearful,
how nicely you grip the nails and fix your foot,
on the nails fixed in the wall like a date tree root,
man will rise to the highest heights,
the child is knight of the knights,
and when I saw your reach at your destination,
I saluted your courage and your perfection.
You are our future,
you will change the ugly caricature.

Promising Future
Monday, November 2, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: future
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mantu Mahakul 02 November 2015

Promising future is very interesting poem shared here. Hopeful surviving is nice in theme shared. Special care should be taken for children. Thought provoking and wonderful poem with excellent expression.10

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Kelly Kurt 02 November 2015

maybe his generation will start to get things right

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Sanjukta Nag 02 November 2015

The poem emits rays of hope... the child is knight of the knights... they are the possibilities. wonderful!

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Bisma Mirza 09 November 2015

Great! ! ! 10 on 10.....................

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Valsa George 08 November 2015

Children are our hope and joy...... the builders of our future! We, elders can stand and proudly watch their accomplishments and the heights they conquer! Enjoyed this poem of hope with a lovely picture!

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M Asim Nehal 04 November 2015

Awesome poem on hope and courage.....I liked the way you started the poem and by end it became a true magic...Loved it Janab.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 03 November 2015

man will rise to the highest heights, the child is knight of the knights, and when I saw your reach at your destination, I saluted your courage and your perfection.......Fantastic feeling shared. Beautiful poem.

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Loke Kok Yee 02 November 2015

but parents will have to bring them up right thank you sir

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