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Bathed in moonlight and sunkissed in the day
Rhea with the long tresses and nowhere to stay
Thin as a waif, will qualify for a model on the ramp
She starves herself to feed her little tramps
Yes, She starves herself to feed her little tramps
Found in the garbage, wailing to feel a heartbeat
Rhea with the long tresses was raised on the streets
She still frequents the garbage to scavenge it deep
A bunch of children flocking like sheep
Yes, A bunch of children flocking like sheep
Moving around like a princess with her head held high
Rhea with the long tresses and heart in the sky
She will kick any man...ouch! in the groin
Will not have anyone throwing a coin
Yes, will not have anyone throwing a coin
Little by little, her flock continues to grow
Rhea with the long tresses and her beloved's a crow
They are the biggest family in the whole coast
To her beautiful spirit, lets raise a toast
Yes, to her beautiful spirit, lets raise a toast
Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean
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Thursday, May 10, 2007 |
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Friday, February 25, 2011 |
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Comments about this poem ((Q) 1 (SONG) TO RHEA!
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Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean
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Preeti - is here! (5/31/2007 4:27:00 AM)
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Wow, Rhea gets a song for herself..and its the best i've ever read..this is by far one of your best works! !
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Geoff Warden (5/11/2007 6:02:00 PM)
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Very well done T>O> each verse echoing sentiments.......
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Sandra Fowler (5/11/2007 2:51:00 AM)
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Your Rhea is a proud and tragic figure. She deserves a song. Very memorable
work. The sadness echoes long after the last line has been written. Take care.
Warmest regards,
Sandra
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Frank James Ryan, Jr. (5/10/2007 11:59:00 PM)
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Hauntingly brilliant work.T.O....SURREAL REALITY IN ITS WRITTEN BEST...lOVE THE WAY YOU ACTUALLY CREATE AN ECHO OF HAUNTING TONE BY WAY OF VERSE REPETITION ON THE lAST 2 LINES OF EACH STANZA...Gripping, indeed!
FjR
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Frank James Ryan, Jr. (5/10/2007 11:59:00 PM)
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Hauntingly brilliant work.T.O....SURREAL REALITY IN ITS WRITTEN BEST...lOVE THE WAY YOU ACTUALLY CREATE AN ECHO OF HAUNTING TONE BY WAY OF VERSE REPETITION ON THE lAST 2 LINES OF EACH STANZA...Gripping, indeed!
FjR
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