Quicksilver Poem by Patti Masterman

Quicksilver

Rating: 5.0


All gone down, with their trials and problems,
All gone away, with their joy and weeping,
All have passed, with whatever they found;
All grown quiet now, without a sound.

All their importance, and all they lacked,
All their smugness and humbleness too,
All their loves, and their petty hatreds;
All their lives, every day seems fated.

All their days, condensed into naught,
All their nights, fled too soon to light,
All their hours, now distilled to dark;
All their daring, there remains no spark.

All their graves, there under the dirt,
All their headstones that speak of toil,
All their loved ones, who've moved on;
All waiting their spot, when life has gone.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Robart Frocheart 08 March 2012

The last line did it for me....as far as putting it all into perspective. It showed how the artist was able to second guess herself in the end, knowing this is the way of all the quick not just this one particular entity who now lies forgotten by their family. Well done.

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Valerie Dohren 08 March 2012

Brilliant Patti as usual. Makes one wonder what life is really all about.

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