Rain Poem by Jessica Lee

Rain

Rating: 5.0


When the rain falls,
It; s like me pouring out tears.
I'm filled with pain like the rain;
I'm like a droplet
That can't control where I'm going.

I stand under the rain thinking,
Why does it rain? ...
Giving me all this pain and sorrow
I have on myself that can't be gone.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Romeo Della Valle 22 January 2012

The reason why it was raining is because the heavens witnessed your sorrow and felt your pain, Jessica! Short but strong and well penned write! Thank you for sharing! Keep it up! 10+++ God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! Happy New Year!

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Dave Walker 22 January 2012

A great poem. Like it. Good emotion.

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