Daleen Enslinstrydom

Rookie - 61 Points (25-02-1967 / Springs, South Africa)

Rain - Poem by Daleen Enslinstrydom

When the heaven cries outside
and are taking pleasure
in songs of joy and pain

and comforting feelings
are replacing my hurt

and when the heaven outside pours down
then the earth brings forth new life
after the pain of winter;
when the heaven cries softly.


Comments about Rain by Daleen Enslinstrydom

  • Rookie - 86 Points Ckim Mbasa (8/2/2013 3:29:00 AM)

    oh wow, please thanks for the poem, love it and only that it has left me in suspense coz its short. (Report) Reply

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  • Silver Star - 3,860 Points Dave Walker (8/2/2013 3:29:00 AM)

    A wonderful poem, well written. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, August 2, 2013

Poem Edited: Friday, August 2, 2013


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