Treasure Island

Ben Gieske


Rearranged


parked the car
reparked the car
bought groceries & paid the bill
in the cart she rearranges them
unpacked the groceries into the closet
she rearranges them
set the table and then –
she rearranges it
washed & stacked the dishes
she rearranges them
long ago I said I do –––

now I wonder who this person is

Submitted: Sunday, December 02, 2007
Edited: Wednesday, April 27, 2011

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  • Ivan Donn Carswell (12/3/2007 2:07:00 PM)

    Ben, sneaky re-direction from her to he, & as Yoonoos suggests, says a lot without being wordy! Rgds, Ivan (Report) Reply

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