~ Recycling ~ [new Year Bouquet ~ Niv] Poem by MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK.

~ Recycling ~ [new Year Bouquet ~ Niv]

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~ RECYCLING ~ [New Year Bouquet ~ niv]

Ms. Nivedita
UK
30 December 2009.

Our bodies are
Recycled five Primordial Elements.

Our Microcosms are
Recycled fragments of Macrocosm.

Our body humors are
Recycled ‘Original Sap’

Our breaths are
Recycled zephyrs.

Our phonations are
Recycled Archie Euphony OM.

Our beauties are
Recycled fineries of mind.

Our colors are
Recycled VIBGYOR.

Our thoughts are
Recycled informations.

Our emotions are
Recycled imaginations.

Our actions are
Recycled inclinations.

Our knowledges are
Recycled reflective ‘Wisdom’.

Our hates are
Recycled self devaluations.

Our loves are
Recycled ‘Supreme Love’.

Our beneficences are
Recycled Sattva Gunas’.

Our energies are
Recycled ‘Omni Energy’.

Our workholisms are
Recycled ‘Rajas Gunas’.

Our sorrows are
Recycled ungratifications.

Our egotisms are
Recycled myopic self.

Our greeds are
Recycled void feelings.

Our fury and funks are
Recycled ‘Tamas Gunas’.

Our raptures are
Recycled spark of ‘Bliss’.

Our rebirths are.
Recycling of ‘Jiva-Atmans’.

Our ‘Jiva-Atmans’ are
Recycled minuscule of ‘Param Atman’.


All our recyclings are
Recycled obliviousness of
Our innate ‘Scendlessness’.


Glossary:
OM: The basis of all sounds, universal ‘symbol-word’ for God. -Veda
Gunas: Three attributes of Nature
Sattva: Expansion, Intelligence, Wisdom.
Rajas: Activity, Energy, Struggle.
Tamas: Obstruction, Mass, Ignorance, Inertia.
Atman: The Divine within the self.
Param Atman: Suprememe ‘Self’, All Highest, Secondless.
Jiva-Atmans: Supreme ‘Self’ in miniscule ‘self’.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Almedia Knight-Oliver 07 January 2010

Hi Niv, I enjoyed reading this poem...even if I had to read it a second time. I'm enlighten when I read your work. Its amazing the power religion/ beliefs can have on a society-'psychsomatic' explains it well. a 10++++++

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Dr. V. Chakravorty 09 January 2010

The Title of Poem is Unique…and the Theme too Superb… Magnificent conception and full of Wisdom [Vedic]…finally the added Glossary made it readers friendly … 10 Dr. V.

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Dr. V. Chakravorty 09 January 2010

The Title of Poem is Unique…and the Theme too Superb… Magnificent conception and full of Wisdom [Vedic]…finally the added Glossary made it readers friendly … 10 Dr. V.

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Alison Cassidy 09 January 2010

Your title is brilliant, as is the theme (recycling) of the piece. I find the whole poem a tab laborious though - a bit like a too long shopping list. There are nonetheless, quite a few jewels dazzling between the lines. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Ravi Sathasivam 12 January 2010

Brilliant write. Shown deep thoughts and philosophy.. I am enlighten when I read it. Well done Enjoyed 10+

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Narender Singh Bansal 25 November 2010

old wine in a new bottle, well done modern poetess

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David Beckham 05 August 2010

My mother would always tell me, 'There is nothing new under the sky' If she sees this she would say, 'I told you didn't I? ' well done

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 02 August 2010

this reminds me of a story about a gold tried in the fire.... like a diamond on a black cloth... anyway, nice write as always

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Pranab K Chakraborty 01 August 2010

Good poetic demonstration of Indian classical philosophy in contemporary times. Hypothetical study of human brain-war between reality and unreal, between light and dark, between death and eternity. Furniture is gorgeously engraved with pearls and diamonds of etheral conceptions, so it will be very ecstatic to use a living furniture which is uplifted mentally from its material root. That is the realized human being who attains such truth by heart. Sometimes supreme uses it and sometimes the ignorant part of supreme (unrealized individual) . Thank you much for offering such beauty. One thing perhaps you have missed to mention......all such poems are the recycled poems of ancestors........ Enjoyed. Regards, 10++++ pranab

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Sally Plumb Plumb 01 August 2010

We must be constantly recycling ourselves. Food for thought.

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