Patricia Grantham

Gold Star - 6,442 Points (Moncks Corner, South Carolina)

Refreshed - Poem by Patricia Grantham

Wake up and smell the sweet roses
Nice aromas wafting up your noses
Rise up from your slumbering sleep
Open the door and take a big peep

The sun has risen and shines anew
Earth renewed from the morning dew
A day appears just for me and you
Arise and see another day through


Copyright 2013

Topic(s) of this poem: sleep


Comments about Refreshed by Patricia Grantham

  • Amitava Sur (5/31/2014 8:25:00 PM)


    Reading this poem right in the morning very honestly I feel so refreshed that I remember you repeatedly now Patricia! ! A lovely poem I read. (Report) Reply

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  • Om Chawla (5/9/2014 7:34:00 AM)


    What a lovely write and so well rhymed, Pat. I join Valsa in wishing you the ensuing days to be full peace, delight and beauty. (Report) Reply

  • Tirupathi Chandrupatla (5/3/2014 7:03:00 AM)


    The sun has risen and shines anew
    Earth renewed from the morning dew
    Beautiful day opens up. Rise up and enjoy the surroundings. Enjoy the life. Thank you.
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  • Goodenough Sakhile(shotaromeo) Dlamini (4/30/2014 11:11:00 AM)


    Rise up from your slumbering sleep
    Open the door and take a big peep, i can feel that mornig eagerness
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  • Valsa George (4/27/2014 6:14:00 AM)


    Lovely poem... Pat! A very promising day is at our door step....! Let us greet this day with rising delight and hope that the ensuing days also will be as beautiful as today...! Small and sweet write! ! (Report) Reply

  • Herbert Guitang (4/24/2014 7:36:00 PM)


    Wow. I voted and rate 10. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, April 24, 2014

Poem Edited: Sunday, February 7, 2016


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