Be stilled by a mouth of prayers
As I sing my blues away
Hearing your sighs of brokenness
I lay dead on these runaway thoughts
Choosing on forever's dream
And drinking the 'eyes' of 'whys'
Reasons I call subdued
By the colors of her runaway thoughts
Stilled by a foaming mouth of the sea
'Hearing your sighs of brokenness I lay dead on these runaway thoughts'... Meaningfully allusive...reads most poetic...good work...10
well...nice written poh... with an emotionally stated: D MORE power to your writing career .......merrypens....♥ w/love: D
when we kneel down to pray, our runaway thoughts just go astray and if we can get up in time, then you know you're doing fine. VERY WELL WRITTEN! LUVVVV IT!
Hearing your sighs of brokenness I lay dead on these runaway thoughts, ......passionately allusive, yet by deeper meaning,10+, thanks for sharing
Beautiful...very spiritual in nature...a requiem of submission to peace
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
The switch in thought, is like switching gear. In an ever changing world, a switch in time is saves nine! lol...great work! !