Meggie Gultiano

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......Runaway Thoughts

Be stilled by a mouth of prayers
As I sing my blues away
Hearing your sighs of brokenness
I lay dead on these runaway thoughts
Choosing on forever's dream
And drinking the 'eyes' of 'whys'
Reasons I call subdued
By the colors of her runaway thoughts
Stilled by a foaming mouth of the sea

Meggie Gultiano
Submitted: Friday, July 09, 2010

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  • Merry Virgo (7/28/2010 2:04:00 AM)

    well...nice written poh...
    with an emotionally stated: D
    MORE power to your writing career


    .......merrypens....♥
    w/love: D

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  • Catherine Yen (7/26/2010 12:48:00 AM)

    Beautiful and imsaginative.

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  • Louis Rams (7/25/2010 9:00:00 PM)

    when we kneel down to pray, our runaway thoughts just go astray
    and if we can get up in time, then you know you're doing fine.

    VERY WELL WRITTEN! LUVVVV IT!

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  • Dr.subhendu Kar (7/22/2010 3:37:00 PM)

    Hearing your sighs of brokenness
    I lay dead on these runaway thoughts, ......passionately allusive, yet by deeper meaning,10+, thanks for sharing

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  • Dove Allen (7/12/2010 7:59:00 AM)

    Beautiful...very spiritual in nature...a requiem of submission to peace

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  • Kesav Easwaran (7/11/2010 7:46:00 AM)

    'Hearing your sighs of brokenness
    I lay dead on these runaway thoughts'...

    Meaningfully allusive...reads most poetic...good work...10

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  • Yoonoos Peerbocus (7/10/2010 12:08:00 PM)

    rich allusions in few/ tight write/meaningful[ hearing your sighs of brokenness]

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  • David Beckham (7/9/2010 8:20:00 AM)

    The switch in thought, is like switching gear. In an ever changing world, a switch in time is saves nine! lol...great work! !

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