John F. McCullagh

Bronze Star - 2,122 Points (09/28/1954 / Flushing)

sacred Flame (A Tale Of The Neanderthals) L - Poem by John F. McCullagh

The newcomers killed my woman,
Ransacked my cave and killed my child.
My brother and I had been out hunting,
The only reason we’re still alive.

We noticed first as we drew closer
The sacred fire had gone out.
We dropped our catch and sniffed the air-
When I smelled blood I grabbed my axe.

My spirit dropped, my heart was saddened
My woman and my child lay dead
The newcomers had speared the baby
A club caved in my woman’s head.

My brother took the child to bury
I built a rock cairn for my mate
I stroked her matted hair in sadness
I stoked the fire of my hate.

From outside I heard my brother
Bellowing his battle cry
Four newcomers were attacking
I grabbed my spear and let it fly.

My aim was true, my man was gutted
My brother crushed another’s skull.
The other two ran short on courage
They fled as we stood side by side.

We too must flee, the caves’ unsafe-
And they’ll be back in force besides
We looked back at the cave in sadness
As we bid our home good bye

The ashes in our cave are cooling
Throughout Europa its’ the same
So many of my people dying
Who will tend the sacred flame?

Comments about sacred Flame (A Tale Of The Neanderthals) L by John F. McCullagh

  • Gold Star - 60,123 Points Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (5/31/2015 12:06:00 AM)

    Dark, Graphic and thoroughly Captive...Just the way I like poetry to be! Good Stuff, John! ~FjR~ (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 28,812 Points Kim Barney (5/30/2015 3:39:00 PM)

    Engaging story told well here. I enjoyed reading it very much. The only thing that bothered me was the two misplaced apostrophes.
    Again, great poem, and congratulations on having it chosen as Poem of the Day! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 36,460 Points * Sunprincess * (1/5/2014 6:38:00 AM)

    ........this is a nice captured the feeling well.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Lillian Thomas (1/30/2011 5:40:00 PM)

    nice to read you again, John. A well written tale. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Yonder Boatcar (2/26/2010 5:16:00 PM)

    Awesome, I'd give that 10 out of 10! ! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, February 26, 2010

Poem Edited: Saturday, July 31, 2010

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