hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 34,296 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Same Love Story - Poem by hasmukh amathalal

Be no under impression
That people will praise your relation
Love story
And express sorry

It has to be unique and not found
Previously on he ground
That it attracted our concern
And waited for happy turn

Love can never be hated
It is related
With humanity and mankind
That is all for us to find

Why do we fail?
In our attempts to avail
It is vision
That has to without confusion

I wish all to get their love
In life and purely believe
In real attachment
With close movement

Only lucky survives
And revives
Love bid again
To feel no pain


Comments about Same Love Story by hasmukh amathalal

  • Gold Star - 34,296 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/8/2014 8:42:00 AM)

    Life's difficulty


    XZanthia Octoshroom1 hour ago
    Life difficulty built experience, your palm embraces this.
    Most just flow and sit, thank you for sharing it. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 34,296 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/8/2014 8:39:00 AM)

    Life's difficulty


    XZanthia Octoshroom1 hour ago
    Life difficulty built experience, your palm embraces this.
    Most just flow and sit, thank you for sharing it. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,107 Points Geetha Jayakumar (8/8/2014 6:58:00 AM)

    Thoughtful write from your pen. I loved the lines...
    Why do we fail?
    In our attempts to avail
    It is vision
    That has to without confusion......Very true said, there should be clarity, combined with vision. Loved reading it.
    Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 34,296 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/8/2014 3:04:00 AM)

    Be no under impression
    That people will praise your relation (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, August 8, 2014



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