Our hearts have strings like guitars
Once passionately tuned
With melodious notes
Beautiful harmonies
Are conceived
These guitars
Instruments of bliss
Send soothing vibrations
To the universe around us
Totally energized
By these heavenly lyrics
The dervishes swiftly decide
To whirl around their hearts
Sanctuaries of love
Our hearts have strings like guitars Once passionately tuned With melodious notes Beautiful harmonies Are conceived. so much attracted am i with your first stanza and the ending words Sanctuaries of love. thank u dear poet. love to read you. tony
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Totally energized By these heavenly lyrics The dervishes swiftly decide To whirl around their hearts Sanctuaries of love........touching expression with sanctuaries of love. A beautiful love poem with thrilling expression has been astutely presented. Thanks for sharing.
The sanctuary of love.....how devine. So poetrically articulated. A poem that is music to the readers ears! nicely done!
I like the opening line of this wonderful poem. It touches the heart and grip the reader to go through the whole wriite. An inspiring. poetic gem. Very heartwarming. Another great poem, Irfanulla. Thank you for sharing.10++
When I was in Turkye I have seen the derwishes dancing indeed Sanctuaries Of Love. An exciting experience to see them dancing in concentration. You created here a wonderful poem, Irfanulla. Indeed, Our hearts have strings like guitars, absolutely. Thank you for sharing these Sanctuaries Of Love. God Bless You and your beloved family. A 10+++++++++++++for the voting.
Wonderful thoughts and images emerge as the music of this poem plays to our senses and takes us to the sanctuary of love.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Fine and lofty verse written with clarity of thought and mind. Thanks for sharing.
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