Scar Poem by Lyn Paul

Scar

Rating: 4.7


Sometimes
We are punished
For who we are
This can leave
A nasty scar
But it's trying to
Not take these words in
For you cannot choose
Your next of kin
You can choose
Though
Your solid ground
And turn your life
Right around
There is new hope
Everyday
There always is
A better way
So get out there
And think of you
Your life should never
Ever
Be blue

Copyright reserved May 2014
LYN PAUL

Tuesday, August 28, 2012
Topic(s) of this poem: believe,hope,self discovery,survival
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anil Kumar Panda 05 June 2015

A positive drop.Keep inking.

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Anil Kumar Panda 05 June 2015

A positive drop.Loved reading.

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Melvina Germain 24 October 2015

Yes indeed, we must love ourselves first, let the truth be told. Truthful poem...

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Kumarmani Mahakul 25 October 2018

Sometimes we are punished and this leaves a scar in mind. Life should be cheerful and always beautiful with joy, peace and love. An interesting poem is very well penned...10

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Christopher Tye 19 April 2017

Great poem, us humans are far to judgmental and unforgiving as a species.

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Bri Edwards 16 March 2017

yes! this poem will do nicely for March showcase,2017. you express some worthy thoughts. 'It' is easier said than done, but we should strive to NOT use that as an excuse to stop (or not start) trying to improve our quality of life, if we are not satisfied with it. but, first, stop to consider if life is so bad for you. and: how can you help make it better? and........give a bit of thought to others as you go along 'your way'. bri :) thanks. p.s. i ALWAYS think of ME, Me, me! ! ! ! !

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Annette Aitken 23 August 2016

I love how positive your writes are, you give strenght to others...... Annette

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Edward Kofi Louis 03 April 2016

We are punished for who we are! ! ! ! Thanks for sharing.

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