chloe young

Rookie (Ireland)

Sea (Haiku) - Poem by chloe young

the sea engulfs me
into a world of despair
i want to be free


Comments about Sea (Haiku) by chloe young

  • Rookie - 498 Points Indira Renganathan (8/2/2009 11:11:00 AM)

    A sea of sorrow engulfs you into a world of despair...hope is your breath..come up to the shore of happy life (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Kale Beaudry (7/7/2009 1:22:00 AM)

    I believe it is 'engulfs, ' not to be a dick haha but I don't want to see this haiku blemished. If you did it on purpose please let me know so I can delet this. Your theme of water/ocean seems to play a key role in your work.

    And remember, the sea is just another world not yet explored... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sameer Ahmed (6/6/2009 4:12:00 PM)

    A trembling soul wanting to be set free and get sociable
    with the chain of delieverence....10/10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, May 26, 2009

Poem Edited: Tuesday, July 7, 2009


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